literature

Lonely:

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Literature Text

When you're
so unwanted
that even
your thoughts
choose
to exit
your company.
I am not sure what to think of this. Hmmm... I tried to make it like I am poetically defining the word lonely? Eeep, thoughts? >.< I also had an extra "verse." reading "leaving the deep, black nothingness to pound upon your skull." I took it out do you think it would enhance the poem, or elongate it too much?
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cute10102's avatar
I relate to this very much.