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When we said friends forever and
crossed pinkies like grade-schoolers,
I could only believe those words
lodged in your heart
like they did mine

because every time I think back
I can't help but remember the
late-night conversations
under star lit constellations,
and study sessions where we
learned more about each other
than we did Biology  

but now it's clear
that each beat of your heart
has made those words fade,
and you could care less
about crossed pinkies

but I'll still see you,
and hear your voice
whispering
forever,
and I'll still wish
the meaning hadn't changed-
like you.

Time changes a lot of things, but I guess that is how we grow.
Stay rad cuties! :heart:

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coolcats101 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
wow this hits me 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Glad it did, sunshine! :hug:
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BeautifulDesecration Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks darlin'!!! :hug:
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UnluckyAmulet Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This hits really close to home for me. Amazing work!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Aw well hope it helped!!! ^.^ Stay wonderful!!!
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dawn-giant-dragon Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student General Artist
*thumps chest over heart then raises hand to a salute* i have experienced this first hand, i remember her, she forgot me.....*bows head* i will never forget, never Waaaah! 
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QueenFangirlI Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
- sniffle - I-I'm not crying... - cries -
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, cheer up buttercup! :) You deserve positivity! :)
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DawnSpiritKitten Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Very touching poem. You did excellent with this. :)
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU DEARIE! :D You are the sweetest! :)
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DawnSpiritKitten Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You are very welcome. You seriously deserve loads of kind comments and appreciation for this, haha. :3
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WolfsRainandKH777 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Wow, that touched me very much. I lost my best friend a while ago. I still think back about how we used to do things together. Very nice poem, by the way :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aweee, glad it touched you! Hope you are doing well, and thank you so so much! :D Stay wonderful!
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WolfsRainandKH777 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Yeah, I'm better. No problem :) And thanks ^_^
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:icontriplecrane:
triplecrane Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Been really worried about this happening with all my small group of high school friends ever since going off to college
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If you want to stay friends, and keep on growing how you want to, you will! :) I am still very close with many of my friends from high school!
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Mihuchi25 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
Omg i was just feeling like this and I found your poem at the first page of deviantart thanks for your beautiful words it's like a fate really ~ >w<
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww so glad it helped q t! Stay rad!
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lilybunny25 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really good poem! ~:heart:
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU :D
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LenTheGardener Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very well done , dear
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thanks for the sweet comment, lil flower. Have a great day! ^.^
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Shadzx2 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student General Artist
This struck a cord with me on so many levels. I've found it difficult to make 'best friends,' so I can relate to this poem a lot.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, glad you could relate!!! Good luck making friends, be patient, it takes time to build up friendship!
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StellarReaches Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014
A good poem. Thank you!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks sweetie! :)
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Phatbear1400 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just recently had a falling out with someone I've been friends with since I was young, which sucks because I care so much about her, but it's just how life is I guess.....
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, sorry to hear that! It is life, and if your paths feel a need to cross again, they will! Be confident in where you are going, you are on a successful journey!
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Pyalicious Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014   Digital Artist
I don't think there's one person who doesn't lose at least a best friend in the process of growing up :P
Nicely written! Keep up the good work
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
True! And sometimes friendships go separate ways, and then end up coming back together. It's all part of life. THANK YOU :D
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Savingfadingstars Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I used to not believe in friends,
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
and now you do? :)
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Savingfadingstars Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes. I met a lot of people who changed my mind. I thought I was alone. Alone with people. It's like being underwater for so long, then surfacing and breathing. 
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TheMask02 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 6, 2014  Student General Artist
My Life in one poem. 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You can get through! :)
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acorpsegarden Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
<3 guess i can relate; nice poem.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS!! :hug:
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Ninjashewolf Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Wow, actually pain. 
I dont even know where things went wrong. 
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay!!! It will get better, and you will grow! :)
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Monstermental14 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Student General Artist
I miss to lose my bf IvanWaaaah!    
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It will be okay!!!
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Monstermental14 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 6, 2014  Student General Artist
I know, its been 4 years since I last was him and wanted to  tell him that I loved him.
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Flutttershykindness Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
//cries
so true :'c
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3 It only gets better sunshine! :hug:
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RainbowSprinkes Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I can relate all too well
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
</3 Stay positive!
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RainbowSprinkes Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:)
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Thomas-Koidhis Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
This
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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