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When you said
you needed space,
you meant more
between your fingers,
so you could hold
someone else's hand.
I am not sure if this one is up to par, it might need some rethinking. Feedback please and thank you? :heart:

OH AND ALSO CAN SOMEONE SUGGEST A BETTER TITLE PLEASE!!!
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NutmegRufRuf's avatar
My gosh this is so beautiful!!!!!!!!! 

It's crazy how reading one poem, with such strong words, can cause someone to cry. 

Amazing, amazing, amazing, job.