You stand here in
this somber place,
the rain pelting
your sorrowed face
I think about
how you do feign,
as your salty tears
mix with the rain
And as your lips do drip
with bitter sorrow,
I yearn for you
a better tomorrow
Is it rain, or is it pain?
A wonderfully written piece. Thanks for sharing!
We are all one vast ocean of tears...
Maybe sometimes we are...
Rain always seems to mirror sorrow and pain, but in a way it's quite peaceful. C: I loved it! Great job!
This kind of makes me feel better than I do right now, strangely enough.
hmm...grate minds think alike
Maybe a bit of both... Sometimes it's easiest to fake it until you can secretly let it all out. At least, that's what I take from this. Good work as usual.
Thank you!! This is actually an older one I edited!!
it is really nice
No matter how much it rains it can never hid ones tears. But as time goes on things will get better very emotional and very pleasing. Nice work.
Very emotional, I like it.
It is rain and pain, and that always works well together. I love the last four lines ♥
I relate to pur poetry, and it captures the pain so well!