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You stand here in
this somber place,
the rain pelting
your sorrowed face

I think about
how you do feign,
as your salty tears
mix with the rain

And as your lips drip
with bitter sorrow,
I desire for you
a better tomorrow
Is it rain, or is it pain?
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very emotional, I like it. :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU, BUT I LIKe you. :) :hug: you are awesome.
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha okay :)
If you say so. :XD:
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
nice!!!!! D'aww Misty Heart 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Yuesumi Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It is rain and pain, and that always works well together. I love the last four lines ♥
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS! :)
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That1PersonUForgot Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Featured here --->

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Have a wonderful day! :heart:  I am a dummy! 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thanks! You too! <3
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That1PersonUForgot Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Neko Emoji-16 (Blush) [V1]  You're welcome!
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