Sorry for the stream of darker poetry in the last uploads, I shall try and mix it up more in the future! Still working on multiple pieces, but this is a shorter one that came to mind today, and I liked it enough to upload! FEEDBACK APPRECIATED!
so i'M A FUCKING FRENCH FRY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I really like this poem, maybe b/c I really don't like this saying. If all we are is the food we eat, then where is the value of human life?? This little 'mantra' has always frustrated me to no end. I love your poem! I think it calls out the fallacy in it.
Whoa this is really sad isn't it. It's very powerful though. A lot of times I like it when writers write shorter things so that they can get a point across more efficiently and I think you did that very well here. Hopefully you do not really feel like this though! Because I can guarantee that you are not nothing
This is not only dark but also sort of thoughtful and a different approach to the statement "you are what you eat". It doesn't have that super foreboding tone that I would normally expect so all is good!