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I heard someone sarcastically sputter,
"You are what you eat."

But hearing that sole sentence
allowed me to finally understand
why I am
what I am:

Nothing.
Sorry for the stream of darker poetry in the last uploads, I shall try and mix it up more in the future! Still working on multiple pieces, but this is a shorter one that came to mind today, and I liked it enough to upload! FEEDBACK APPRECIATED! :D
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augmented-arpeggio Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I felt like I just got hit by a brick wall made solely of melancholia.

(Excuse me for my rather insane subtle unsubtlety, but that was intended to be a compliment of your powerful poetry).
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahah thank you! I liked the way you phrased that! ;)
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augmented-arpeggio Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem.
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.
Just...
Wow.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU! <3
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massive-drama Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
This is sorta like a post secret poem :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha I could see that! >;)
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azureauraa Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
This is simply brilliant. Short ad to the point, but powerful all the same.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS! :)
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Beth-BethTheColorful Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I really like this. If you wanted to make it longer, you could muse about anorexia, bulemia, and their relation to food. 
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