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I taste
the sweetness
in your words,
only to wonder
how many others
have tasted
them too.
(But dear, I hope your words are true)
AND IS THE TITLE OKAY? I don't know, I feel melancholy just works for this. 

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:iconautisticchick:
AutisticChick Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Student Writer
"(But dear, I hope your words are true)" would be a great title.
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhhh, that would be nice!!!! hmmmm... now I want to contemplate changing it >.<
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:iconcynical-entity:
Cynical-Entity Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Writer
This is the purest definition of my life.
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Aye, isn't it a little bit a part of everyone's life? >.<
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:iconcynical-entity:
Cynical-Entity Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student Writer
Yes. But it symbolizes my thoughts whenever I receive a new "friend", because I am always naive and used to think they'd never betray me. I thought wrong. Always. I always thought wrong. You're nice and poetic at the same time. Surprising and commendable trait in people. #youaremyhero
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! We need to be careful, but also be open to the idea that there ARE great people out there. :) aw you are seriously way too sweet. :heart:
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Cynical-Entity Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student Writer
That is true! I am not sweet. When I see people that deserve a thumbs-up, I will give it to them. I don't consider myself sweet. You are truly amazing. 

And to think I found you from the front page of dA... 
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconcynical-entity:
Cynical-Entity Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student Writer
Love you too, dearie~! *huggles infinite times*
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:iconmiheigawi:
MiheiGawi Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Short but ... wow!
Are you able to read my thoughts? ;)
just ... WoW!
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hahahha maybe ;D BUT THANKS SO MUCH SUNSHINE! :hug:
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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do you really wanna know??
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Most of the time, no. But does that stop me from trying to? Nope.
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:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh oh.... i guess i am a culprit of this XD
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Eeep, aren't we all sometimes? :/
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:iconbelarusian:
belarusian Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaahhaha. Very clever
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, dear! You are too sweet! :hug:
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Glassrainbows93 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
Beautiful and very very true
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH! Have a superb day!
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Glassrainbows93 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
Lol welcome love your work always cheers me up x :hug:
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:iconakaatje:
Akaatje Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
I think the title works fine :)
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thank you! I think I like it more on second glance! Stay wonderful q t! :hug:
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:iconakaatje:
Akaatje Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
^.^ The same to you :)
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:iconzettapt:
ZettaPT Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
Made me tear up a little bit.
Nice job, you described the feeling with a few simple words.
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe so glad it hit you on an emotional level! :heart: Stay rad!
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openskyline Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's good, because the meaning can be derived (i think that is the right spelling?) from just a few words. 
I think that it could ne possibly better to drop the "thoughts" and have the title just "melancholy", but both would work well.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
okay thank you! I have recently really been liking longer titles and I don't even know why! I feel as though they are giving the poems more depth? hahah. Anyway, thank you flower, and stay splendid!
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Crazy-Dayz Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
You have the words to tell things! Nod 
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AWE THANK YOU. And you are such a sweetie taking the time to comment kind words! :heart:
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:iconcrazy-dayz:
Crazy-Dayz Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
  You're welcome! I really like your work! :happybounce: 
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:icontheweelad:
TheWeeLad Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
this is kinda sad in a cynical kinda way.
i like it
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah :/ But I am glad you enjoy it! I love your deviant icon, by the way! :heart: SO SO CUTE!
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:icontheweelad:
TheWeeLad Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
It is like sweetly bitter fruit, and I am glad you like the icon, I did it myself actually.
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe well superb job at making it!
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:iconmidnight-specks:
Midnight-Specks Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
Short and sweet. Very strong.
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! You are sweet! :heart: Stay splendid, and have a fantastic day!
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
From what I think, they sell chocolates in boxes so that they can be shared. It shouldn't come down to melancholy from thinking it's a singular possession. Share the love. :)
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe this is the cutest. You are the cutest. Stay original and awesome! :hug:
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe thank you. Same to you, ma'am. :)
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:iconopenskyline:
openskyline Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that what TangledTales is saying here is that one of the people in a relationship fears that the other is a hopper- just jumps from person to person with no real attatchment to anyone. And that the hopper says lots of nice things, but the words are empty. I didn't get the idea that it was a person who just spouted compliments because they are kind. 

I see your point, though, and I adore your analogy.
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Guess I didn't get that the first time reading through it. Thanks for telling me. ^^;
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:iconopenskyline:
openskyline Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. :D
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SurvivingExtinction Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconchichichichipndale:
chichichichipndale Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This poem is describing a slut.  I think.
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
False! Well, I mean I guess your interpretation is as good as my own intentions. XD
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PrincessKatydid Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The title is great! "Sweetness" would also work, but that's just me. I love the sentiment captured in this poem, because I know I have felt that before. I wonder how many others have too. Thank you for your beautiful work!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AWE YAYAY GLAD YOU CAN RELATE. You are too sweet and wonderful and yeah, just stay super coolio friend. Your words are sweeter than that title suggestion. ;D
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
That's a deep thought...
I think you worry too much about titles, you know?
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:icontangled-tales:
Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe yeah just a lil deep haha. And yeah, gah, I over think though. It is my tragic flaw. But thanks for the comment, you are wonderful! Have a splendid day!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
That's not a bad flaw to have :D
And you're welcome :)
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