SexyPancakes10113Featured By OwnerJan 14, 2015New memberStudent Writer
Yes. But it symbolizes my thoughts whenever I receive a new "friend", because I am always naive and used to think they'd never betray me. I thought wrong. Always. I always thought wrong. You're nice and poetic at the same time. Surprising and commendable trait in people. #youaremyhero
It's good, because the meaning can be derived (i think that is the right spelling?) from just a few words. I think that it could ne possibly better to drop the "thoughts" and have the title just "melancholy", but both would work well.
I think that what TangledTales is saying here is that one of the people in a relationship fears that the other is a hopper- just jumps from person to person with no real attatchment to anyone. And that the hopper says lots of nice things, but the words are empty. I didn't get the idea that it was a person who just spouted compliments because they are kind.
I see your point, though, and I adore your analogy.
The title is great! "Sweetness" would also work, but that's just me. I love the sentiment captured in this poem, because I know I have felt that before. I wonder how many others have too. Thank you for your beautiful work!
Short and to the point and yet very emotional. I can just feel my throat closing around my fear of being lied to and tricked. Becoming one of those people who fell for those sweet lies. Really powerful.
Awe what you described is literally it. Thanks for the sweet comment, as per usual, I appreciate them more than you could ever know, dear. You have a great day, do something adventurous! Do something you enjoy! MAKE TODAY PERFECT.