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I am the sun
and you
are the moon:
my tidal-wave
tears
are controlled
by you

So when it's 2am
in the middle of the night,
I know why
I can't
sleep tight.
My thoughts for the night. Feedback appreciated. TITLE SUGGESTIONS TOO?
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MusicAndArtRocker Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Rhymey...in a good way.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU! I thought it flowed pretty well.
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Nortstar Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
it is really interesting ^^
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yayay! Glad to hear!
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Nortstar Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
you are welcome :hug:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is fantastic! :iconyay-plz: Just what I needed to read. :D <3
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww <3 GLAD TO HEAR!
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:la: <3
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primalfuryan Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
:iconaparazita-r::iconsquirrelflight-77:Your artwork has been graciously featured in Titans Genuine Literature feature ,stay wonderful!Hug:iconsquirrelflight-77::iconaparazita-r:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh, THANK YOU! :)
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