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Isn’t it ironic?
The concept of our life
That everything we work for
Will undoubtedly die
The beauty of our faces
The muscle that we’ve toned
The high paying job we worked for
The objects in our home
The thoughts we think important
The ones we surely don’t
The memories now filling us with bliss
And of course the ones that won’t
Our dearest friends
Our family
No one shall escape
The one thing guaranteed to everything
Will also be our fate
What fate do we all share?
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psychosquatch Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Screw possessions, a "perfect" body and social status. Can't have it without losing it anyway. Anything beyond the bare minimum for survival should be strictly by choice, not to appease societal standards. In the end, we are nothing, so why must we have everything? Sorry for the rant, but your poem made me think a bit. :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH! I dig the rant! Stay fab! ^.^
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psychosquatch Featured By Owner 5 days ago
I always keep it awesome. :)
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streamofcolours Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Wow, your poetry is really inspiring :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks sunshine! You're fab! ^.^
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feelthesky Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Somehow I find this poem about death actually inspiring to live. It reminds me of how short life is, which is something that, I think, everyone should always keep in mind. And the fact that we all share the same tragic destiny reminds me of how important it is to leave something wonderful and different behind. Beautiful poem! :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! :) AND YES I AGREE!
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otherland78 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
be a part of this great universe with all it´s facettes and amazing things we would never have come to realize when we wouldn´t be here ^^
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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openskyline Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You somehow manage to write a wonderful poem about death without ever actually saying the word "death". Fascinating.
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