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Cement Heart

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Literature Text

I built a wall
around my heart,
and swore
I'd never let you in

but the more time that
I spend with you,
allows the beats
to crack
the cement.
But isn't it better to be careful than not?
PS: Title okay?
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BrandonAtDeviantart's avatar
The title is fine. The structure is quite short, but it is a free-verse so I don't mind. (Constructive criticism).