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I built a wall
around my heart,
and swore
I'd never let you in

but the more time that
I spend with you,
allows the beats
to crack
the cement.
But isn't it better to be careful than not?
PS: Title okay?
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KatanaOngaku Featured By Owner 13 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
YUP
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danqtheman Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
That describes me completely.  Also great use of poetry.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS QT! I am the exact same way, though. Protective.
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NutmegRufRuf Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
The title is outstanding! 

'Cement Heart' will be ringing in my ears all day. 

Fantastic job. 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw you are so so sweet! Stay awesome! Really. Your comments and favess mean the world! :)
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NutmegRufRuf Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Thank You! 
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Writer
yes, it okay to be careful. i understand where you are coming from and the title seems fine to me.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you dear! :D Stay great.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome.
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Nortstar Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
it is so pretty :)
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