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I think I was your drink of fine wine,
only used when needed from time to time
I'd get you tipsy, as stars collide
Your drunk, slurred words
blending in with mine
(I couldn't even comprehend
when you said it wouldn't happen again)

I think I was your cigarette break
when anxiety filled,
from me, you'd take
One puff here, and one puff there
(I could barely hear
when you said, "I'm sorry, dear")

I think I was your line of cocaine,
thinking I'd be there to ease your pain
I'd bring you higher,
head suspended in clouds
(So I knew it was fake,
when you said, "It was my mistake")

I think I was your bad habit,
and ignorantly, you were mine
You continue to relapse, my dear
But rest assured:

I won't this time.
Some people are just self-destructive for eachother. Some of us just use one another. Started jotting this down while in psychology class. Not sure if it came out right? Feedback please! :)
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RayTheFilipinoGwaiLo Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
I have a bad habit of taking the last Rice Krispy in the box without asking anyone.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well that is a bit more low key. Although still painful to those who wanted that last treat! Stay awesome, sunshine! (and maybe give half of the treat to a sibling or friend)
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Yatzstar Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I've got a bad habit. It's ridiculously childish, and I definitely shouldn't still be doing it in high school, and I don't know when I'll stop. But this has given me the tiniest bit of hope.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww I hope you figure out how to deal with any bad habit! If you need someone to talk to, NOTE ME. :heart: Stay rad!
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otherland78 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
i always wonder what you experienced so that you know about those things to write them down .......soetimes i feel like a little kid believing in santa claus
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
To be honest, this is just a fictional piece, haha. :)
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MaryBalderrama Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014   General Artist
Very well written and I love the ending! :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! So glad to hear! :hug:
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SleepingInTheShadows Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love the rhyming you did in this. The last stanza is my favorite. So strong.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :')
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