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You drown yourself
in liquid sorrows,
letting the salty mess
burn your wounds,
and the sadness
to drip in your mouth,
consuming your words

and you say
you deserve the pain,
but I want to dry your face,
and whisper in your ear
how the clouds cry too,
while they hold such beauty,
and so do you.
You are beautiful, and you are loved. :heart:
Wow, second longer title in a row. I must be growing whimsical.
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Iheartanimeforever Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it... would you mind looking at my stuff? I don't really know if i'm good or not so i kinda want some critiquing.Saori Sheepish Icon 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes of course! Send me a note and link me to the work you would like me to check out!!! (or a link to your gallery if you want random works looked at) :)
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noelmaghathephoto Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014   Photographer
freaking amazing as always man Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Happy Dance) V6 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks so so so much!!! GAHHHH :heart:
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LacrimosaR6 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!!! You are a talented writer!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks sweetie! ^.^
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LacrimosaR6 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;)
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Sandirela Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Goose bumps! Awh, what an amazing poem. 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you sunshine!!! Stay rad for me! Keep enjoying poetry!
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DynamiteHearts Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This made my tear up. Beautiful, thank you 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, glad to hear it hit you emotionally! Hope it helps out many! :)
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AmberDianePie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Writer
The feels
All of them
Right now
Tears
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thank you so so much again! You are so very kind. Thanks for browsing through my poetry! You have a great day, okay? :hug:
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hetaliallover101 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing...I truly needed this, I'm on the verge of tears...thank you for making this
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe don't cry dearie! You deserve the best day ever!!!! Sending hugs through my computer screen! :hug:
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PandaNotes Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Stunning work :) , you are a wonderful writer. Hug 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thank you so much dear! You are a wonderful person. :hug:
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PandaNotes Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Aww you are welcome Hug , and thanks :happybounce: . You're such a lovely person and amazing writer Clap .
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RainbowPitch Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This made me tear up. Thank you for the kind words. It makes me "happy" to know others are so caring for those out their who're like me. Thank you. 😌
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw no problem dear! You deserve to have someone tell you how awesome you are! Stay wonderful! :hug:
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RainbowPitch Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Means alot, thank you!:) (Smile) 
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MusicalGrays Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
Thank you for all your buetiful words , I thought sorrow was all I will feel , for loosing the thing I love the most and just can't let go ....
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AW NO. Please send me a note if you ever need me. I assure you sorrow can be replaced by something much more better. Sorrow is too much a burden to hold, let it go. :hug:
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MusicalGrays Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
But I loved him so much we were best friends


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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is always hard to let go of those things that created such a positive impact on our life, at some point. But, when they become more of an anchor than a life raft, it is time to move on. Be strong, q t. :)
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MusicalGrays Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
Ok I'll try , thank you Tangled-Tales
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CremePuffMarshmallow Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This just makes me want to cry tears filled with mixed feelings. All good, at least I think so. Very inspiring work. :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thank you dear! Your words are so sweet! :) Stay awesome~
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CremePuffMarshmallow Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
No problem at all, you deserve the compliment:D and thank you, I will stay awesome^^
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BruhImGhay Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
This made my heart sink, but in a good way. Keep up the amazing work(:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw I am so so so glad to hear that! I want to get people thinking and feeling various emotions. Stay rad and wonderful! :hug:
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Autumn-Fest Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
You are very gifted with these words......you reflect my feelings.....
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw you are too sweet, seriously. Stay awesome! :D :hug:
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Autumn-Fest Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Don't worry I will. ^u^
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FindingWhatsLost Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you so much for sharing these words with the world. Sometimes the world just seems so full of wrongness and hate. And you sit around in your sorrows wondering why the things that have happened in your life did (what did you do to deserve that and at the same time thinking that there is a reason... that you some how deserved it). But then I read words like yours and my perspective of the world changes. Without pain and sorrow we wouldn't be as amazed and appericiative of the beauty we see, hear, and are touched by all the time. And I am expessally touched by how supporting your beautiful words are of people. That whole second stanza was just so beautiful and inspiring... and I'm going to say it again touching. You truly are one of the most beautiful and commpasionate people I have seen work from. Stay wonderful.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my this is one of the sweetest comments I have ever recieved. It is so kind the words you have written ti me. You deserve anything and everything, dear. :)
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FindingWhatsLost Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist
Your very welcome. I'm glad that you appriciate my thoughts... and you deserve the world to... I hope you know that. Stay awesome and as sweet and genious as ever.
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Aurorella Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really had goosebumps all over my skin when I read this... <3 Thank you for sharing your poems with us!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you so much dear!! You are too sweet! Stay wonderful, sunshine! :heart: :hug:
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NutmegRufRuf Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
The cloud metaphor is so beautiful! Poetry is in your bones, because the messages you bring are not tangible but so strong! Amazing...simply...amazing.
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aw you are so so sweet darling! :) Stay rad! I am so happy you think so!
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NutmegRufRuf Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
:-) :-) 
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ourage Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The cloud metaphor is absolutely beautiful! What an amazing piece...I completely ADORE this!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH. BUT YOU ARE SO SWEET FOR COMMENTING, AND THEREFORE I ADORE YOU! :hug: :heart:
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. I love how you described tears in the first stanza. Lately I've been having a hard tome stepping away from giving hits into a cliche to describe soe things but you've done just that perfectly, here. (You know, if perfection existed - it's right in that stanza. :)). Still, a beautiful poem with an amazing message. As usual. :)
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awww you are so fantastic, thanks for commenting!!! :) Stay wonderfuo dear! :D
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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r0binVI Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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