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You drown yourself
in liquid sorrows,
letting the salty mess
burn your wounds,
and the sadness
to drip in your mouth,
consuming your words

and you say
you deserve the pain,
but I want to dry your face,
and whisper in your ear
how the clouds cry too,
while they hold such beauty,
and so do you.
You are beautiful, and you are loved. :heart:
Wow, second longer title in a row. I must be growing whimsical.
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Sandirela Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Goose bumps! Awh, what an amazing poem. 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you sunshine!!! Stay rad for me! Keep enjoying poetry!
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DynamiteHearts Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
This made my tear up. Beautiful, thank you 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, glad to hear it hit you emotionally! Hope it helps out many! :)
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AmberDianePie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  New member Student Writer
The feels
All of them
Right now
Tears
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thank you so so much again! You are so very kind. Thanks for browsing through my poetry! You have a great day, okay? :hug:
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hetaliallover101 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing...I truly needed this, I'm on the verge of tears...thank you for making this
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe don't cry dearie! You deserve the best day ever!!!! Sending hugs through my computer screen! :hug:
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PandaNotes Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Stunning work :) , you are a wonderful writer. Hug 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thank you so much dear! You are a wonderful person. :hug:
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