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You drown yourself
in liquid sorrows,
letting the salty mess
burn your wounds,
and the sadness
to drip in your mouth,
consuming your words

and you say
you deserve the pain,
but I want to dry your face,
and whisper in your ear
how the clouds cry too,
while they hold such beauty,
and so do you.
You are beautiful, and you are loved. :heart:
Wow, second longer title in a row. I must be growing whimsical.
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Iheartanimeforever Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love it... would you mind looking at my stuff? I don't really know if i'm good or not so i kinda want some critiquing.Saori Sheepish Icon 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes of course! Send me a note and link me to the work you would like me to check out!!! (or a link to your gallery if you want random works looked at) :)
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noelmaghathephoto Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014   Photographer
freaking amazing as always man Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Happy Dance) V6 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks so so so much!!! GAHHHH :heart:
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LacrimosaR6 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!!! You are a talented writer!
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awe thanks sweetie! ^.^
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LacrimosaR6 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;)
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Sandirela Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Goose bumps! Awh, what an amazing poem. 
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you sunshine!!! Stay rad for me! Keep enjoying poetry!
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